Monday, December 9, 2013

Standstill

I have some news and as most of you already know- I'm going up to IN today to go help my grandpa during and after his open-heart surgery! This means that I'll probably be gone for two weeks and won't be able to do much blogging, etc. So for that time that I am gone this critique group - IS AT A STANDSTILL. At least for you new people who joined who I haven't gotten set up with a critique partner, etc. For those of you who already have one you just keep on firing away =) That also means that for my critique partners- I WON'T BE ABLE TO CRITIQUE OR BE CRITIQUED TILL I RETURN! 

Thank you guys for being so patient with me. I know I'm doing an awful job at doing this critique group! I've just been so busy...

Please keep my grandpa in your prayers =)

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

I apologize

 

First of all I would just like to say that I am so sorry to all of you! I know that I have lacked greatly in doing this group and I am so sorry. I have been so busy over the last couple of weeks that I have not had a lot of time to do anything with this group. If any of you have requested to join the group and never got an email from me, etc. please comment on this post informing me! Also if any of you have gotten partners please email me telling me how you and your partner are doing and give a brief overview of their writing =) Thank you guys for giving me patience. I know I've been terribly forgetful lately. So if you have anything you need that I forgot please DO NOT HESITATE to ask. I'll try to get on it right away!

Friday, October 4, 2013

MARY B. & TW WRIGHT please read

I don't have a lot of time so I'm just going to do this quick!

Mary you won 'Lily: Song of the River" from my book giveaway =D Please contact me as soon as possible with your shipping information! thanks and I hope you enjoy the book =)

TW you won "The tutor's daughter" =D Please contact me as soon as possible with your shipping information! thanks and I hope you enjoy the book =)


Thank you both 4 entering! I hope you enjoy the books as much as I did =) they are both very good!

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Book Giveaway

Yep that's right =) I'm having my first giveaway here on "shining bright critique group" 
I will be giving away two very amazing books! I have read both of these and I can personally say that these are two of my favorite books! They are just splendid =)

The first book I am giving away is...

 Lily: Song of the River book #1 

  

^ It says kindle edition but I'm giving away a real paperback book! ^


& the second book


The Tutor's Daughter 

 

^ this will also be a paperback book. ^

 

OK, so I hope that two lucky winners will be able to get these books and throughly enjoy reading them! I sure enjoyed reading both of these books by these great authors =) If you'd like to read each books summary just click on the tittles above!

 

Here is how it works:

You just comment below stating that you want to enter my giveaway and put which book you would like to receive! The giveaway winners will be announced: October 3rd

 

Mandatory entry:

You must be a follower or member of "shining bright critique group"

 

Extra entries:

Follow my blog: Daughter of the King 

Put my blog button on your blogs sidebar

Do a blog post about this giveaway 


Hope you all have a great day! Hope many of you all enter =) 


COMMENT AWAY


Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Writing inspiration

Here are a few very inspiring quotes about writing =) I hope you enjoy these and that they help you in your writing journey!


:) 

   

The unpublished writer 

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*truth*

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Hope you enjoyed these. I would also just like to say that I am sorry that I have not been posting or checking emails regularly. I've been super busy lately, so please have patience =) I'm really sorry about this. Soon I plan on having a writing contest on here and I will try to get you hooked up with your partners ASAP

Wednesday, September 4, 2013

a guest post || The wood between the worlds.

The wood between the worlds!
source
No, I don’t believe this wood is a world at all. I think it’s just sort of an in-between place. 
—Digory Kirke, The Magician’s Nephew by C.S. Lewis

Good morning, writers! How are you doing? I'm rather nervous as school officially starts today, and I've never been to the public high school, having spent all my life up to my junior year as a homeschooler only. Thankfully, I had some experience with "public" school through Washington State's Running Start program last year, though it was all online. But I don't come here today to write about my trials as a sudden public schooler. . .and before I get into my real message, I've promised to tell you that I'm guest posting for our beautiful authoress and blog administrator Brittney Ann, since she's out of town this week.

An "in-between" place is what I want to talk about today, and I'll try to keep it short and to the point. This "wood between the worlds" is actually the wood where you stand when you've finished the first draft of your book and are planning to move on to the second. You might be eager to leap into the pool under your feet, but at the same time part of your brain could be a little cautious. Maybe you've heard that you should wait a while before embarking on that second-draft voyage. Should you? should you not? If you do, what are you supposed to do during the break? Do you keep writing? Or do you just take your well-deserved rest, incubating on whatever great ideas you know you've got somewhere inside you?

I don't want to repeat this entire page on the increasingly popular blog Go Teen Writers, but I do want to answer one question and give you two assignments afterward.
Q: To take time off or not to take time off? That is the question.
I believe that yes, you should take time off. It doesn't have to be six weeks like Go Teen Writers's Stephanie Morrill, author of The Reinvention of Skylar Hoyt series and The Revised Life of Ellie Sweet, recommends, but you do need to get away from your manuscript for a while. After working so hard to finish Draft One, you're probably a little burnt out on the story, and if you're not excited about your book, you aren't going to get anything worthwhile into your pages. Because I tend to work better on a schedule or some organization, I would tell you not to sit around waiting for the spark to come back--I'd suggest actually setting your break for a certain amount of time (two weeks, three weeks, thirty days. . .), and I'd also recommend not making that time too short. You need enough time away from the book to "grow" a little, so you can actually recognize the faults your book has (because, let's face it, it will have faults), while you also need to make sure you're coming back to it soon enough that valuable time (in which you could have gotten published!) isn't lost.

Now to the assignments.

#1 If, sometime during the writing of the book you just finished, you had an idea for something new, now's the time to begin working on that project.
The idea for my "next" book, a fairy tale retelling, started trying to complete itself only six or seven weeks ago. I'm pretty sure it has a long way to go, but I'm working on it by following some of the guidelines of the article I linked to above. I wrote a synopsis of it in July, and by now have exposed the illogical points of the fairy tale and have also started "composting". If you click the link above ("this entire page"), Stephanie Morrill will explain what "composting" is. 

#2 Start reading up on writing articles, writing books, and anything else that will help you in your potential writing career.
If you need a place to start, click here. There's a lot of articles (most of them from Go Teen Writers) to help you in various areas, and all it requires is some time spent reading through them. I hope to go through that whole board (deleting pins as I go, so that I can fill it up again during Draft Two) before I start on my "serious" book again. 
What do you think about taking time off before you commence your next draft? 

Hannah is sixteen. She's tall, brown-headed, loves detective shows, and is very excited to have finished the first draft of her book, The Bridge Between Heaven and Hell, on August 27, 2013, after 972 long days and about 225,000 words. She's an amateur fashionista and a professional dreamer. You can find more of her ramblings on life, writing journey, and thoughts on various literature by visiting her blog, walking in the air.

Already done with your allotted break from Draft One? Click here to find a sample schedule on getting ready for, and writing, your second draft.

Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Welcome

Welcome to the brand new "Shining Bright Critique Group" If you'd like to be one of our first members please comment below with your email address, what genre you write, If you'd like to be:
A. a Critique
B. have your book critiqued
or
C. both


Hope you join, and I hope that this new club/group will enhance your writing experience and that some day soon you will be a published author =)

P.S For those of you who do not feel comfortable putting their email out in public if you just tell me in your comment that you don't want me to post your email on here I'll do that =)